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Feature Multiple

1 — Katie Rausch
The Flint Journal, Michigan State University
On a mission

2 — Nick Dentamaro
The State News, Michigan State University
Rubie’s Paradise Salon

3 — Nichole Hoerner
The State News, Michigan State University
Self-defense for women

Comments:

First — Photography clearly well done, excellent use of light. A clear winner.

Second — More visual variety would help in multimedia slideshow. A tighter edit to reduce redundant images would help this package. Nice atmosphere.

Third — Needed more motion/action. Photos were really static. Lead image had good impact. Detail image doesn’t really add to package.

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