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1 — Nick Dentamaro
The Citizen Patriot, Michigan State University
Candlelight Vigil

2 — Nick Dentamaro
The Citizen Patriot, Michigan State University
Fire

3 — Nick Dentamaro
The Citizen Patriot, Michigan State University
Learning to Bank

HM — Patrick Siller
Central Michigan Life, Central Michigan University
Xmas Party

Comments:

First — Beautiful light; good composition, layering & captures the emotion of the event — very nice job. (beyond this image, none of these should really have been entered in a clip contest)

Second — Good job getting to the scene as it was developing – could be stronger with some more action/connection between the firefighter and the window.

Third — A little to straight forward & needs a moment.

HM — Pretty weak — needs to be tight in on that moment.

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